was an amizing book i think u should write a sequal for when he gets out of jail and they meet up again that would be awsome thank u for the good read

i loved it
it was great..... loved the ending!!!

i just read your comment, thank you for your advice... that was my first book .. i am still learning and always open for advice

i loved this book!!

Omg what a sad ending but overall a really entertaining book

I couldn't stop reading this story from, I loved it all, wow what a great ending. This story just made my night

It was nice to read. I do have a bit of advice though. You could expound on the graphic sex parts. When you say she stroked her clit, you could use more descriptive words such as , "her vulva pulsated hot pink with heat, etc..." Just food for thought. It helps to prolong the the reader's mental image which will keep their erotic senses up throughout the book and make them go crazy trying to read more!! Awesome though... :)

too much detailed sex

Omg this is a I cant put it in words but you did your thang on here it should really be a 2 3 4 and 5 lol

Omg this is a I cant put it in words but you did your thang on here it should really be a 2 3 4 and 5 lol