Its amazing... :)

I love the description. It was like a breath of fresh air. Please develop this. It is really good.

Whoa this was awesome

Its very nice story :). I loved it. Its different from any other stories I read!!

Really its incomplete Sketch...!

Its beautiful :)

This was a small and cute story I ever had read :) Thanks for sharing and it gave me a different experience !!!!!!!!

I definitely loved your story, Sakshi and didn't want it to end.

I hope as you grow in your talent as a writer you choose to revisit and develop this story further.