diplatu
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diplatu

Nice written! Still it is incomplete. I want more from you.

beccadancer27
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beccadancer27

this is just an explanaition of two people having sex. weird.

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Heartbreaker
Heartbreaker

I know right. I didn't bother finishing it

kimmyj79
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kimmyj79

I liked where you were going with this. but it needs to be longer. i think you were doing great then just stopped.

kitkat1310.readers
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kitkat1310.readers

that sucked

kitkat1310.readers
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kitkat1310.readers

that sucked

kitkat1310.readers
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kitkat1310.readers

that sucked

mitchell616
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mitchell616

that was very erotic and polite sounds like a high class woman making love