wow! this was great(:

wow....................eventhough moves smooth and makes us feel normal,the final touch exactly reveals a real character of a woman who was longing to join her lover in future ............amazing...feels worthful

wow.............eventhough moves so smooth and make us feel like normal .the final touch exactly reflects a real character of a woman who really waiting for a life with her lover.............amazing

Leaving home for the big city and all its opportunities is something that I can relate to.

All the best

Betty c

good short story It is very excited

Thank you

i loved this story and wish it was a longer novel!

i loved this story and wish it was a longer novel!

this is one of the best stories I've written

I loved the story. You are a great writer,

I loved this story! I wish it was a full length novel.