really good i like how you tied in the cullens and the volturi

im sorry, that the english is not that great. i wrote it in german and translate it with an website, because it would take too long to translate it all by myself. i look throught it, but maybe i havnt seen the mistakes. sorry.

It didn't really make any sense to me. The English was not really good as well.

tiffany64.....same thing happened to me! stupid eh? lol

WOW this book is amazing and ive only read 14 pages

umm so i wrote in twilight in and i get this this place sucks for books