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I like this art of pure story-telling.'Bear hug' is a successful short story. But there are some minor irritants eg. I find two different spellings of the name of possibly the same person-'Sudipta' & 'Sudipto'. Otherwise, great reading!
An interesting story.I think you may consider improving the format.Your work wins my vote.
From the name of the story I was expecting a completely different plot - adventure of seven college kids in a jungle, but the story totally surprised me. In that way, it is a true short story. There is a natural flow in the story line, and the incidents near the end totally surprised me. It is really hard to gauge human mind, so I don't know whether to call 'it' natural, but 'it' definitely is something to ponder over.... Show more
Hmmm... Politics always confuses me. You have the right idea but you could improve more on your presentation. I look forward to reading more of your books though. Thanks