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vendicoliettajonesie

Awesome

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lainey8910

should make it longer..great writing though..i wanted to stop reading it ( i hate stpid vampire books..darn twilight series sucked) but i couldn't. :] very good

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chrysallis

It was short, but intriguing. You certainly had my attention. Keep it up.

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mocookie21

i think it needs more sexual contents

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jenbella1112

wow that was sexy

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shaezy08

It was alright while it lasted. Should be more, though.

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jojoperson2

very sexy book add more pages

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authoroffantasy

Love the ending and how you put details in but it's not a run-on great write! :)

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abby1235

A good read.Over too quickly.

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generalhicks

That was a Good story. I loved the way you put some much detail into it made it that much better. I write a lot of books. If you get the time read one and tell me what you thank.

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