should make it longer..great writing though..i wanted to stop reading it ( i hate stpid vampire books..darn twilight series sucked) but i couldn't. :] very good
should make it longer..great writing though..i wanted to stop reading it ( i hate stpid vampire books..darn twilight series sucked) but i couldn't. :] very good
It was short, but intriguing. You certainly had my attention. Keep it up.
Love the ending and how you put details in but it's not a run-on great write! :)
That was a Good story. I loved the way you put some much detail into it made it that much better. I write a lot of books. If you get the time read one and tell me what you thank.