Wow this is going to be a great book, because when i'm reading it seem like I am right there where all this is taking place. You have my vote I LOVE IT GREAT JOB MR.RIDDICK GOOD LUCK
Hi Leslie,
I think you did an excellent Job on The Diagnois. A heart-felt story. Maybe next time cut down on your paragraphs too long.
This will make a series of story books...Good Luck in the contest you have my vote and a star.
Linda B
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Thank you Mrs Brewer. I know you read it all before (a few times). The full version of the book is tough. This was just a chance to see a little bit of it and learn how to do it better.
THANK YOU THANK YOU :-)