You are so misleading, one: the title and two: the cover, i really thought that it was Yaoi!!! BUT IT'S NOT!!!
so not cool :( but i will forgive you and read it anyway, JUST THIS ONCE :)

this is a gr8 story, love the ending, it's so different from other stories, but that's sooo sad.

finish plz

loving it !

she should remember seth!!!!!! it's so sad. i love yur writing btw.!!

please put some more of this book
up thanks

Why,why,why,why...WHYYYYYYYYYYYY??? MAKE HER REMEMMBER!!! SETH PLZZZZ? THEY WHERE SUCH A GOOD COUPLE!! AT LEAST MAKE A BOOK 2.....ok sorry for the yelling but its true wait,does luke know? Hope not ;) I luv your book u rock!!!

Why,why,why,why...WHYYYYYYYYYYYY??? MAKE HER REMEMMBER!!! SETH PLZZZZ? THEY WHERE SUCH A GOOD COUPLE!! AT LEAST MAKE A BOOK 2.....ok sorry for the yelling but its true wait,does luke know? Hope not ;) I luv your book u rock!!!

awwwwwwwwwwww tats so sad...u should make her remeber seth or something........:'(

I think this books plot line was very good but was hard to understand. There was quite a lot of spelling mistakes so i would advise you to work on spelling and the way you write things. My favorite part was when Luke and Maya have the passionate moment and after he confesses his love for her. The plot seems all a bit sudden, they meet, an hour later they kiss, then 2 hours later he tells her he loves her and 5 minutes after that they meet at the park where he confesses that he is a vampire. I loved this story however i think you need to work on the structure as you write it like text and script as well as a story would normally be written. For me it was a bit to much but i have to admit it was such a good story aside from all this. I think you should write more as is a bit of a cliff hanger so i would love to read more of it. Next time you could focus on the structure of you're writing. I didn't like the fact that it all happened in the space of 2 days as in a book with this sort of background you need to space it out over a matter of weeks if not months. I am definitely adding this to my favorites, as i still feel it was quite a good plot. Next time maybe you could write your story on Microsoft word before hand so that there won't be any spelling mistakes.