Thanks. I try really hard to correct my mistakes; I read the whole thing over and over, looking for anything that needs to be edited. What would I have ever done without English in school and dictionary.com?^_^

Many of the books on here I get fed up with; author's lack of grammar, correct spelling and sentence structure is often too frustrating for me to read through. However, I believe this book could develop into quite a novel :) You have an excellent character, and as someone who was bullied in the past, it is great to see a stand for kids in that kind of situation. Excellent idea. Keep up the good work! I have a feeling when you are finished this will be a good read. :D

upload and please dont make that the end ;( cause i have been bullyed i have be sexually harrassed and hit a few but never that bad keep it up ;)

thanks! no, none of that ever happened to me...except the bullying. i was never beaten up though.

. but its written very realistically. nice work, loneworlfgirl. keep it up!

i'll make sure to change some stuff :)
thanks for the input