NiaLove
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NiaLove

awesome!!

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Fariha
Fariha

yes it is

livingmylife
livingmylife

Thanks my peepssssss! Yall are so frickin awesome too!

NiaLove
NiaLove

I KNOW LOL!!! And you are completely welcome <3 :)

Sian xox
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Sian xox

Its really good!!! You need to update soon!! :)

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livingmylife
livingmylife

Aw, thanks so much!!! I was busy today but I'll just message you when I do. <3

Sian xox
Sian xox

cool thanks :)

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Deleted User

It's good. Has a nice story-line.
It could use some editing, and it's paced very, very quickly. Too quick. Maybe you should go over it again and slow it down, describe things, give the readers a good image in their head, ya'know? :D
Also, sometimes when people are talking, I get confused as to who is talking because you don't say who it is. :\
Other than that, it's good! Keep writing! owo

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livingmylife
livingmylife

Thanks for the tips! I was hoping someone would give me some. Lol thanks, I'll go over it soon. <3

Fariha
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Fariha

wow really nice when you update next chap.

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livingmylife
livingmylife

Aw, thanks so much. <3

Fariha
Fariha

your welcome,if you update tell me ok

livingmylife
livingmylife

I just updated the last chapter. ;)

Fariha
Fariha

ok,D

Arooha Arif
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Arooha Arif

seems nice. started reading... :)

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livingmylife
livingmylife

Aw, thanks so much. <3

Arooha Arif
Arooha Arif

pleasure :)

Chelsea
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Chelsea

please update

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livingmylife
livingmylife

I will tomorrow. Thanks for adding my book! Whoot whoot! You must be freaking awesome. Lolz

Chelsea
Chelsea

i think???

livingmylife
livingmylife

Lol don't doubt it. ;)

An-Isa
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An-Isa

love this book so far xxx

TillTheEnd
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TillTheEnd

What an exciting book. ♥
Asher sounds Hot♥ and I'm inlove with his teasing self. And I love his name lol.

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TillTheEnd
TillTheEnd

Exactly, guys are confusing but so are we. Lol

livingmylife
livingmylife

Oops, I thought you were the one who didn't respond to the last comment. You know when you're waiting for a reply but you're the one who forgot to? My bad! Lol and yes we are too confusing. But guys are so complicated to figure out.

TillTheEnd
TillTheEnd

Lol, I know right. >.<

livingmylife
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livingmylife

I updated the book some and I still am. Tell meh if it needs anything. Thanks. ;)

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alice.a
alice.a

Hey I'm not sure if you ment it that way, but in the blurb conceded is the past tense of concede (like to give in). If you ment it that way I'm sorry for sounding a perfectionist or anything, but did you mean conceited (proud and full of yourself)?

livingmylife
livingmylife

Oh nah you're good. Thanks yeah I meant conceited. Stupid auto-correct! Lol thanks again. ;)

alice.a
alice.a

No problem :)