Very promising! A good read. You might want to check out mine :) It's called "Hunted".

I thoroughly enjoyed this! I am not a huge fan of reading, so when I read something I like it certainly means something. I would so but this if it got published, and it is so interesting because there are so many ways I could see this going. I really liked youur writing style. Keep up the work ^^ Good luck =D

i would read it! it looks like a really action packed novel! i voted for it and hope it gets published!

IT LOOKS AMAZING! I WOULD DEFINATLY READ IT!

This looks like a really good book, I would definatly read it! :)

This looks awsome! :D

Looks like a good book!

Looks amazing, good work :D

Looks like a great book to read! Can't wait til its finished. Keep up the good work!

I think this book would be good... Very interesting excerpt.