Well for one thing you have to give a piece of the meat to get the reader interested. You get saying mistakes and stuff that happened in the past. It isn't interesting at first glance. You need to captivate the reader immediately or else you have lost 75% of possible readers. Once you read the whole thing, it does get interesting though. Another thing to think about is "Short and Sweet". It is a code you must go by to become... Show more
Well for one thing you have to give a piece of the meat to get the reader interested. You get saying mistakes and stuff that happened in the past. It isn't interesting at first glance. You need to captivate the reader immediately or else you have lost 75% of possible readers. Once you read the whole thing, it does get interesting though. Another thing to think about is "Short and Sweet". It is a code you must go by to become greater than yourself. If you make a preview, shorten it, then shorten it again until it is bare bones. Make the interested reader look at it and think they know something without actually giving the whole thing away. My opinion. Okay. Bye-bye.
