Your book seems to be interesting & it has tempted me to completely read it .
two chapters so far (time I do not have to read more at thiks moment) but I enjoyed the story so far. It is different and that is a good thing. This is not my normal fare so it has to be good. Watch the editing as there are a few mistakes, but the story is good and you are telling it well. Keep it up.
Bluedragon
two chapters os far (time passes so quickly) but like what I read though there are a few mistakes, not many (some words left out, other like uses instead of use, if you see whata i mean. Wish I could read more though not my normal type of thing and, it is dofferent and that is good.
Bluedragon