Well written as usual.

You captured the fear in a young boy's heart, and left us wondering about the witch until the end.

Well done.

good Luck on the contest.

I had a feeling that the evil hag was going to be his sibling,lol. Cute story and a typical Laz one- this is going into my fav's for sure.

I know Laz doesn't want votes on this, but, I say, why not? Clearly among the best offered in this contest. Witty and introspective; classically written. One of the best writers I have read in this forum. Atta boy, Laz! Off to read another of yours that I started earlier.

Keep 'em coming! I could read anything written by you all day . . . time permitting:)

OMG! Sounds like the weird nonsense that sometimes happened between me and my brother when we were very young. Very, very clever and well-done, Laz! Thanks for writing this. Loved it, and will be voting for it!

Good images of a boy in a hurry.

I had a sister like that too.

You should use this as the start of a longer book. Good potential for a story about a boy and his sister.

Perfect! Just the right amount of suspense leading up to the near-tragic ending. Good fear-inducing fun.

Man you got me!!!
I thought for sure it was going to be something bad, I mean really bad.
I love the rush of the story, keeping me on the edge of my seat with anticipation and to finally get to the end.
LOVED IT!!!
You got my vote.

The ending was just epic! I loved the child like perspective, it made the whole "witch" even funnier once I reached the final sentence. You're on a roll Laz :D