What is there left for me to say except you are a true Romantic. That's always a good thing. Serena

Very romantic and beautifully written. I enjoyed your lyrical words immensely.

I enjoyed the read and the letting go and enjoying. There is a whistful nature to the words.
Well done.
Cleveland

You are in your groove here, Laz. Amazing description; I could easy "see" the scenes in my mind's eye!

mention that i would love to see this in poetry form...you know with the whole stanza thing going on.
However, even in its current format it was charming and elevating.
Good luck in the contest,
wendyxxx

As usual... and all the goods have been said.

I floated a while on your words and am only now, lazily drifting back toward cold normalcy.

Thanks for the journey.

That was so thrillingly sexy, dearest Laz. You are definitely the master of the tease, the romantic among us who knows the way to a woman's heart. Through your sensual words you bring a smile to my face. Now if only you could take a trip to California and whisper those sweet nothings to me...I would be on the near side of Venus.

I dare say you have picked up a flair for prose. Which century did you learn to write in? Shakespeare would have been jealous. As always, I am in awe of your talents. Robynn

on all reviews I have read. A poetic love song from a guy riding on the horizon of the milky way.

A masterpiece, I'd say a wonderous frolick!