I must say, that was one of the most beautifully-written "frolics" I've ever had the pleasure to read. How talented you are!

Thanks Bud....that's exactly what it is...a frollick.

You are an excellent prose writer. Great story!

In that case, maybe one day I'll write something serious...lol.

I’m with Patrick on this one. A mythical romance in a mythical setting, rendered with style and warmth. I love the prose in this Laz, it’s poetry.

Carol x

Very good job. I liked it.

Lazarus,

You have done it again. Very beautiful and touching. Exceptional writing my friend!
I loved it. :)

Wow Laz! I think you were in one of those inspired moods :)

You created a mythical realm, personifying romance in a way I haven't seen you do quite so eloquently. One of your little masterpieces, sir.

the master has taken us through a lifetime of bliss...beautiful..p;]

A lovely book, being used for a great idea.
God Bless, Chris