This was one of the best short stories that you have created. You have earned my vote and appreciation for the invite to read it./joeparente

Now that was the end of the world! So sad, but very good.

Sorry Kaitlyn

Oh, and intense even though it was only two and a half pages. Loved it!!!! :)))))))))

This has to be the saddest book ever that I have ever read. It made me cry.

i like it..it was good i just know how she feels ...

melrose♥

Great job Laz. The way I like them. Short and telling.

It also has my name. Thanks Lazy. Very good short story. Simple and to the point. I loved it as I love all ur work.

Thanks all,
Yes... it is short, but all what's neccessary is there, and yet leaves you to fill in those spaces with your own imagination.

of the outcome of sin. Her death was unnecessary if she but realized what she was doing was wrong. Pledge breaking is easy and the long term consequences never foreseen....

You packed a wallop in few word - fantastic