this was such a sweet read... the poem was poetic without sounding girlie.... I totally could hear a masculine man's voice reciting it... love it much...

J

I'm usually not into poetry, but poem really moved me.

Great job!

Thanks Melrose, but I'm the lucky one...for her putting up with ME.
Laz

IT was a beautful pome... so much feeling and love in it... could tell it was from the heart.. i liked it..

melrose
P.s your wife is luckey...

Yes, she read the first draft, AND it's me who is the lucky one.
Thanks

The lady that's described in your poem must be very lucky... It seems you could do anything for her! Did she read the poem? Keep the good work going, my friend!

A great pleassure you transmnit in your life as it was and it is.

Nice addition!

This was a really good piece of work. Good luck in the contest.

I just read the poem and loved it! Written with great style, beautiful word usage and nicely arranged I must say. Great job!