Lazarus,

You have written a beautiful and captivating story. I enjoyed it immensely.

Exceptional writing!

Beautifully and elegantly written. Your descriptive abilities bring this peice to life. I fully enjoyed it.

this is truly amazing.

When I have done a "period" piece, I try to stay away from Old English. It bogs things down for me. None the less, this story grabbed at my heart (the one I wear on my sleeve) and tugged it. I am a pure sucker for unrequited love. Well Done! I cry every time I watch Camelot with Richard Burton.

I thank you, Andrea.

Such a poetic, tender and well written love story. It is every girl and woman's dream to be with the one that they have watched and lusted for over years. You have so elequently described every sense. From appearences, touch, sight, and smell. As the saying goes, it is better to have loved then never loved at all. Even one night of passion like that and my world would be complete. Thank You, Lazarus for a beutiful read and touching a secret place in my heart.

You've left me speechless with this one. Everything came together so perfectly from beginning to end yet I found myself feeling sorry for the both of them, that they could only enjoy each other for that one night. I felt her tears at the end and it was very brave of him to leave when he did. I absolutely enjoyed this one, and I will be reading it again very soon.

I think you captured fully the two lovers who were destined to be together...at least once! Beautiful.

Please keep writing. It touches the heart and make it sing on high.

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