Hello,
Here the promised feedback.
A really nice written romantic crime. I like this kind of storys.
Even if there was a sad background, you found a way for many happy ends.
The only point i didn't like was the format jow the story was uploaded.
On my device the letters were very small. This was the reason why I was reading so long.
But, the story was really great! And I liked it, so this is a small point minus... ;-)
Greetings, Eve
Thanks Eve. Yes, you're correct. I used to post using smaller letters. I think most of my newer stuff are different now. Thanks for reading...I got a lot more.
I will read me trought your books...
I'm curious about them :-)
And I'm sure, I will also have a plesure to read them.
Greetings Eve
What kind are your favorites?
I like fantasy mixed with a bit of romance.
I like romance, especially gay romance. You surely ask why? It remembers me to one of my best friends I ever had. He was gay and a really good friend. He died for about 15 years of cancer. This storys remember me at this time so much...
But I like also good fantasy stories or... Show more
This is a really cool book it is amazing you should read my book
This was a very nice and well written short story. Nice descriptions and an interesting ending. Good job Lazarus. I liked it a lot.
Thanks Anthony
I loved the story. I can't help but to feel a little angry because of what happened to the children and the circumstances behind it. This is the second story I have read of yours; ie Lovers and Players. Keep up the good work.
Thanks...I wrote that a while back....I should re-read it myself.
I love a mystery and this one was exceptional. For some reason, with the possible exception of some mature subject matter, it reminded me of the Hardy Boys series, or something by Enid Blyton. It is a captivating story that haunts you until you have read it all. I loved it. Well done.
Appreciate your comment, Dave.
Laz, after reading this, I truly believe everyone that says you are a romantic to the bone. This was a beautiful story with enough suspense to keep me turning the pages, a nice tension relief and way to get the two lovers to fall for each other with the story-reading, and a beautiful way to tie the loose ends together and have a perfect happy ending.
It was brilliant to have you, a male, writing a story with a female lead... Show more
Thanks.
I think you can.
Let me know.
As long as you don't try to steal it to sell . It is copywrited
once again ur a great writer buddy!!!