Very well written. Very realistic. God bless.

I love this story. It was a very fast read that kept me on the edge of my seat. I wish the author would continue the story in the same style showing the 'search' and so on. I really liked it.

Chilling!

Really frightening to think that I could be in the same situation someday.
Very well written and the build-up and the suspense through out gave me goose bumps.

Loved it. Great job

My children are grown now but how well I remember the nights they were late! This story brought all those memories roaring back. Thank God they always came home! Very very well done, and yes I will vote for your story.

This IS a parents biggest fear and you've nailed it...Bravo!

Good luck in the contest. You've got my vote.

it's a discipline to trust our children to god's care when they walk out the door. your two parents have walked all the way down revolution road in a few short hours. no matter the child's fate, i'm certain of THEIRS. haunting story, avery.

Even though i'm only 15, my heart's pounding, my mouth is hanging open, speechless. I could cry if i read it again. I absolutely loved it :]
This is definitely one of my favorites!

Wow, I was at the edge of my seat reading this.
I don't have any kids but I have three nephews. I took them all to the park and one of them walked away for about 5 minutes and I almost had a heart attack.
You captured a parents fear perfectly, the whole idea of posting up the times and how the parent's reactions evolved over that period of time was brilliant.
I loved this
-Angely

Your story is better than mine. Or is it just in my head? I'm not sure of that but anyway good luck in the contest for both of us.
And if you want to read my book here's the link: http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-mihaela-bogdan-aka-red-rose-michaela-biggest-fear