The description of the atmosphere above the clouds is really well done. I was really interested in the picture that you painted.

This story is dark, but also very emotional and I really enjoyed the ending.

Great job!

paperplanes, thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments. I am so, so glad to hear that you enjoyed it. I really wanted it to be different than all the rest. And yes, I hope the ending caught you by surprise. :)
Thanks again!
Juliet

This was a refreshing and interesting take on the (often over-saturated) angel genre. Your way with words ensured I was snared from the very first sentence, and my attention didn't waver until the last word had been read. Clara -- despite being an angel -- was relatable and interesting, which can be hard to pull off. And the ending. Ah, the ending. I don't want to ruin it for anyone else, but it had me going there for a while. Very well done. You're a serious contender in this competition for sure!