Totally unrealistic...
Bella sounds like a total school girl with her first crush... sounds like a damn barbie... the Bella I know despises shopping and fluffy dresses... plus Edward is much more refined gentleman than to take her out to the movies, they probably would have stayed at home and made some dinner and snuggled... but that's just me.
This was a great book about Bella and i thought it was very swell ghope you continue to write books.
this is rubbish and unrialistic. bella is not a stupid bubble head teen and niether is her daughter.and it would be imposibe for jacob to propose on her graduation because since she ages so fast she wouldnt have been able to go to school. if you are going to write bellas diary you shoud get to know bella better!
Well i dont think its the best book ever but i have a suggestion. Why dont you write a book as Bella?x
It is too simple ,and some kind of numb~~It probably is written by a teenager.