It's really good so far ! Can you please let me know when you update !? I like it !

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! PLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEEE!!!

Great book so far!!!! Keep going!!!!!!!!:DDDDDDDDDDDDD

wow thats really good!!! you have to update soon!!!! :)

It's a really great book so far!!!!!!! I know I sent you a message already but I read the one before you changed a little bit of it.

BTW: At the bottom of page 7, it should be "I'm instead of, "I not even sure", and also in that same sentence, the hear should be heard.
Just wanted to help with your mistakes!:D

Hope you don't mind, I mean I did read the dedication script!
LOL!!!:D

I like the changes to the story! :) Of course, let me know when you write more!

So far the story is pretty good. I'm hoping ull add more soon. :D
On page four, u wrote wondurful instead of wonderful; instead of "For her spare times" u should try "In her spare time". The story is really good; please write more! :D

amazing!!!! tell me when its updated

I luv it !!!!!!!!!

he's cute lol i love it :D
Anisa x