AmAzInG please keep me updated
It's good but confusing. How does she get from being choked by the alpha guy to blacking out and waking up next to him, then not finding that weird? Plus the story was moving really fast like you (the author) is trying to get all the information out in one breath but not stopping to explain the details. Make it longer and add some details and it will be really great.
OMG! I love it!!!!! zit is great Plz Please keep me updated on this..you should write more for sure.