to read this but my eyesight was faiuklinbg after reading a snails tale. Which was very good. Well told and not that quirky at all, in my opinion. Wish there was another way I could read this book, Evelyn

I would hate that if it happened to me, i'm going to be extra careful when answering the door on Halloween night!!! LOL!!!! :D IT HAS GOT THE GOOSE BUMP FACTOR!!! :D

I'll pm you so I don't give the ending...hahahaha....away.

Demented!...has to be....hahhaahahahhaha

Oh boy Judy, great piece of writing. Couldn’t stop laughing...umm...I was supposed to laugh...right?

Carol x

lol oh boy, that had me laughing. that was very good story telling. You have done an amazing job here.
I didn't know what to think when she let the thing in the house. I didn't think it was going to be him:)

If you don't pm me with what was in that cake, I will not vote for you!

Seriously, you are terrific. So funny - definitely know teen-speak - and have the gift of the surprise ending.

I absolutely loved it. Well, of course, you KNEW I would.

PS On page 9, where you talk about the creature shuffling towards the kitchen - the sentence gets a bit weird. You might want to re-check it. xxx

Glad I wasn't home alone when I read your story. I was ticked by the fact that her friend kept her on the phone through all of this. You got me. Good job as always. Serena

Bit subdued, for you, Judy. lol
I will be back, to read.
later
Wendyxx