Ohhh, nuts! I was mining your profile page for more gems and discovered this one. Some of the comments were amusing. "Cool, I'll read this...they liked it, let me take a peek at it, too."
'Sorry, this book is only available to users over the age of 18 due to the current'
Snarky little hall monitor won't even allow me to present I.D. I suppose I should be flattered. It's been a while.
<wanders off, reminiscing>
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I have no idea why it was listed as an adult book - there's nothing spicy in it at all. Anyway, I went into the edit function and changed the category. You should be able to open it now, lol.
Thanks, Judy. That was worth waiting for. Great story for the run-up to Halloween.
I've flirted with 2nd person views before but not so well as this. I'll come back to this piece now and again; I'm itching to learn more about this approach.
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Lol, glad you enjoyed it! It was certainly fun to write, and was based on many of my nightmares that began with me entering a house when it was almost dark, and the lights not going on....mwa-ha-ha!
Oh! Meant to mention that my first-born is toddling around.
http://www.bookrix.com/book.html?bookID=ga78129505be245_1412477241.5730330944#13608,486,14868
Feel free to pick it apart. I respect your craft (and craftiness!), Your input can only improve my efforts.
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Buurrpp...oh pardon me...ummm..ummm...good! LOL! It was a wild romp through the wasteland of insanity, couldn't stop, kept reading. It was awesome, good job J. C., And yes I was warned and as a moth to a flame I was roasted, basted, consumed! LOL!
Hee-hee! I'm delighted you were able to digest this...er, I mean enjoyed reading it so much! It was for a contest, and without realizing I was doing so, I wrote it in the second person, something I'd never tried before. Anyhow, I based it on my own nightmares. My mind likes to... Show more
You are so welcome Ms. Judy...Bowing to your expertise...LOL!!
Now, I usually don't like horror books but this is one of the best books I have read in my entire life. I found it extremely mesmerizing and perfectly written!! It kept me reading with the sinister warnings and detailed descriptions! I highly recommend this book to all readers! Keep writing!
~wildwolf
As I said to murderess, I didn't realize you'd left a comment, which is why I didn't respond. I don't want you to think I was taking such awesome feedback for granted - in fact, I'm blown away by what you said! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for that, and my apologies for... Show more
that gave me a huge scare!wow!Love your horror!I truly felt the emotions and it was like being transported there.Like being the desperate character running for life!Keep up the horror! :)
For some reason, I wasn't notified that you'd left a comment. Good grief - 8 months later, here's a heartfelt thank you! Horror isn't my usual genre, but I enjoyed writing this for some reason. Well, I never did think I was normal. Anyhow, thanks for your extremely kind and encouraging words!
@bgarten, crzybelles and sososloanmariee3 - thank you so much for saving this to your favorites and giving me hearts. I am always encouraged by this kind of response, and ever grateful that you like the story! =D
My deepest thanks to all of you. I don't get over to this page too often, I guess because I'm not sure the story is all that good, so it kind of blows me away when I get such kind feedback. So thanks, everyone! And of course my eternal thanks to those who voted for it during the contest. You are all just plain awesome!
Thanks! This was my first attempt at the genre, so it means a lot that you would say that! "D
Wright more!!!!!!
~Please~
Sounds like you enjoy scary stuff. I wrote another one calle "Deception," which was for the Goosebumps contest. Other than that, though, my other stories are either science-fiction, vampire-spoof, werewolf-spoof or simple fiction. I appreciate you taking time both to read and comment - way cool! :D
Thank you - but why would you hate yourself?