Has potential to be a great story. As you get more knowledge about writing and you give your passion for writing more time, I believe you will become a great writer. Attention to detail and grammar are a must.

Nice! I liked the story. Wish it was longer though! =)

excellent storyline few spelling mistakes but a gr8 read all in all lol . . ,

there were a lot of spelling errors but i liked it. it was...very descriptive lol

too much sex but all in all it was good

The book was very easy to read, just wish their was more of good way to grabbed my attention was ready for more is there

it was ok but could have done better

it was ok..too short for me

Amazing concept.. simply awesome