Thanks for all the comments and stars. I'm working on the next chapters, I'll sent an update msg as soon as I post them on Brix.
Thanks for all the comments and stars. I'm working on the next chapters, I'll sent an update msg as soon as I post them on Brix.
HEY GIRLY WHERE IS THE REST OF THIS STORY ITS SUPER GOOD I CANT WAIT TILL THEIR IS MORE AND SOON
Thanks for your response.Gender discrimination is going on through out the world.It is not confined in India only.No rights are enjoyed by the women in Islamic states.In develop states Discrimination is rampant in a subtle way. Actually In India exploitation is going on nakedly.
yes, we do see most cases of gender discrimination in India but still I was shocked to know that it's to this extent.
I just wanted to show everyone the problems they face.
The story 'Nakusa'is against the equality of woman.All men and women are equal is the natural justice. It is denied in this story. Actually 'Nakusa'is not a story. It is fact in Indian society. Girls are still neglected specially in poor section. Thanks a lot.
It is a good story, with an interesting plot. However, the switches between future, past, and present tenses are a bit distracting. Perhaps some editing of the grammar/spelling is needed. Keep up the creativity!