its really wonderful...just got involved in d story but before dat it got over...waiting eagerly to read d rest of ur buk...finish it soon....when ever ur free in d class i'll keep reminding u to think of d story...

This is good reading. I like the way you wrote the dialogue.

Wow - fascinating! A very different take on the vampire/werewolf genre. Spelling, grammar and punctuation are a bit sketchy in places, but the story is solid and entertaining. I really look forward to reading the rest! Good job and the best of luck!

this is a great book where can i buy the rest of the story

I am not really a fan of vampires and witches, but you indeed have a good imagination for a story. You wrote a good prologue and two chapters of your fantasy novel. Caelia and Sera are unique names that fit well in your story. Your book cover looks great. Good luck!

Its very nice. You have a very good imagination :)

GREAT GREAT GREAT .I for hope that there will be a longer Book

A good story with some work needed in sentence structure. I overlooked all of this due to the fact of your heritage. All in all I say you did a good job with an intriguing start of a story . You have my vote and star./joeparente

If I were writing in a language other than my own. . . well, I wouldn't. It would not be fair for me to criticize your grammar, because you are writing the way you speak. I believe that a good editor could help you put the language into proper "English" at the time your book is published. More important is the story and the impact on the reader. You are doing very well indeed and improving with each book. Congratulations to you and I look forward to reading the entire story! Good luck.

I love your fertile imagination and lovely ideas. Way to go, girl! Voted.