It was alright.

very dissapointing sorry !!

your idea of talking dirty isnt good...

damm this shit turning me on i'll finish the rest LATA~!!!!

This has to be one of the lamest erotic novels I have read. Granted it's a rough draft, but the language sucks and the story is not great either.

lovely

1 star across the board! good work

|:(

i wish there could be more of the fuking niccccccccceeeeeee moaning

sucks

that is horrible!!!!!!!!!!!