i really loved your book!
i cant wait to read the rest of it!

I checked it out and found out that you have to go through it twice. Don't know why but when the first page comes up again try going through the book again. It is slow to come up but my book is there. Sorry to all who are having trouble reading my book. Keep in mind it is only a Draft but would love to hear feed back to help me. Thanks again for reading. Vick.

Still can't open entire Book to read what you have...

am I doing something wrong?

Can only read page one-- nothing else shows for me.

I'll try again some other time...interesting start :).

I read most of your story...had to skip because it is very long and I have so much to do. My reactions are these:

On a positive note, you know how to tell a tale, and it holds the reader's attention. Just being able to create something is good, and I encourage you to keep writing.

On a less positive note, although I am not an expert, I feel you need to start at the beginning and fix your spelling and grammar. Mistakes ruin the flow of a story for the reader. You have put capital letters in inappropriate places, i.e., Back Pack, Divorce, etc. and your punctuation needs work. With careful editing, you will have a good piece of work here.

Sorry if I am sounding negative, but you do have some problems...but you CAN correct them, and that is a good thing.

I have plans for Matt. Coming Soon. Keep watching.

Interesting story.
I was hoping the blond at the end would push Matt off the balcony as he was shouting.
Laz