It took me a while to get to this story, but I knew I would. Too many respected people here have given it a nod.
I knew within the first page that this was going to be one of those works that deserves to be applauded, and I certainly do. What a marvelous story, and the denouement was wonderful.
I had to look up a word! "Concatenating".

Just exquisite plotting and narrative. THIS is one of the reasons why I love this place--young exceptionally talented writers coming out of the woodwork, like Patrick S.
Kudos! My vote.

Great story. It kept my attention and you should write more along this line.

This was an amazing story. And the cover made my heart beat fast. Great job!

That was very well writen. I like your point of views and your discriptive paragraphs. Well done I loved alot.

This story captured interest, the descriptions of the scenes were crisp, well done. The voice of the dad was quirky giving a strong character. Emotion was strong. This was well crafted and got my vote. Robynn

Wow, very riveting, heartbreaking, and yet awe inspiring at the same time. Nicely done!!

Top notch writing...AND a great told story. So much sorrow and yet a mysterious sense of satisfaction.
Reminded me of a film I just finished watching called 'Knowing'.
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Your book grabbed my attention right away I didn't want to stop reading till I finished.I was touched by the love shown for his daughter .You have my vote.Serena

I am constantly amazed at the quality of work being put out by young people here on Bookrix. From a fourteen year old winning the Dear Diary contest, to you, a 22 year old, writing such a moving, imaginative piece - I am knocked out. Your story was recommended by Evercaptivating and I concur with everything she said. This is truly worthy of a top ten placement. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to watching you progress. Well done.

I couldn't stop reading until the last page. I highly recommend reading.