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writingmum

If you ever decide to write it up as a novel. And even if you don't, I'll be happy to critique it for you.
Wendyxxx

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glenmarcus

I appreciate all the encouragement. As soon as I finish a few other projects (that are long overdue) "persuing the power" may have to be revisited.

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Backwood writer

Glenn you might be biteing off more that you can chew lol, trying to make you story a novel makes me tired to even think about writing one with that idea of saving the world, good luck if you try it , your friend stanley . if you do make that a novel i would love to read it and... Show more

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tophat

... Or in this case; great knowledge.
Following the thoughts of some of the other comments, i think you should look at making this the start to a bigger project. It is a great little idea.
Good luck,
Kade.

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writingmum

Nicely done and...edgy.
Wendyxx

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paulashene

enjoyed racing through this story with you. We really all do need that savior.

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Carol Wills

I must echo Barry in his comment. Very powerful Glen and well written.

Carol x

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barrycarver

Loved it as the start of a great story and hope it brings you to writing the rest.