True poetry!!! You're an artist in all respect...you have painted a beautiful piece full of poetry, imagery, and wonder.
Brilliant!
Warmly,
writer55

I liked this a lot. Good luck in the contest.

Nicely done!

I'm not really a fan of the romance genre in general (with a few notable exceptions), but this is so beautifully written, I enjoyed it completely and would honestly like to read the rest.

I suppose he shouldn't have fallen for her in the first place but the heart is a treacherous thing sometimes. Live and love again, I guess.

I am humbled. Thanks, Paige. Thanks so much:)

So glad our mutual friend turned me on to your book. Vastly superior to most and definitely deserving of my vote. Well done Mr. Lee!

Your writing is very poetic and beautiful, and you take the reader on a journey with you. You have a wonderful grasp of descriptions, taking us into the moment. I was a tad confused by the two different women..but shall read it again as I am tired. Excellent job, Patrick. Happy to vote for you.

You are not a writer...you are a poet/writer my friend.
A big vote for you.
Laz

One minute snow bound the next flying through celestial skies and love interwoven through both! Two love stories for the price of one, yet both are the same love story. This is great! I like the cadence and flow of the writing as well as the impeccable sentence structure. Nice from creative side as well as correct side. Thank you!!! Robynn