I liked it before and still do!! Voted

I have written the beginning of a tale that is a character study tied
in to a fantastic story. I hope you read and vote if you like it./I
will do the same for those worthy./joeparente
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-joe-parente-failing-well

Comments appreciated!

Just brilliant writing! You can be proud of your talent. Definitely got my vote.

That was a really good story, it had me laughing through most of it! =D loved the characters

I felt as if I was there with Red, Emily and Spike. Very well written; straightforward and the characters are people with whom we can identify. Thank you for this lovely story and I hope to read more of your work; perhaps more on the budding romance between Emily and Red?

So elegant and well written. The way romance is suppose to be. These people cannot be called mere characters, but the creation of a masterful writer. Thank you! Robynn

That was a beautiful piece of writing, simple and straightforward. Reminds you of everyday life.

I loved Emily, Red, and even Spike in "O'Hara's Hat. I was especially taken with your description of Red "Bespeckled man with ruddy cheeks and a shock of white hair that stood up from his forehead like a dollop of whipped cream." I can truly picture this man in my minds eye. I've saved you as a favorite, and look forward to future stories. Thank you!!!

Absolutely delightful! Thank you!

DJ,
I was rushing this morning to finish up a few chores and wondered over to my computer to check if I had any messages. I noticed Paige Carter's and
Gooduklady's comments about this book
"O'Hara's Hat”. I thought, 'oh I'll just take a quick look and finish it later'. Well, needless to say one sentence led to another and I couldn't stop reading. Although, I surmised the ending right after the comment about memory. The conversations between these two beautiful characters was awesome. Then, the teenager kicked in and after a while I actually began to laugh out loud. Masterful!
But then, if Paige Carter and
Gooduklady liked it I knew it would be a shoe-in for me. Thanks for making my morning.

Jack

charming