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tipper

Wonderful poem full of Christmas Spirit!

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tammyd

Petra that was wonderful! LOVED IT!!!

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tariq.summeiyya

Excellent poem full of hope, love and miracles. I would love to see this as a screenplay or a book - it will be amazing!

Thank you for sharing and God bless you Petra,

Tyrone

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chachaneen

"Simon found then kissed Laurie's hand..." Sigh...

Awe that is such a surprise twist that I didn't expect! I really liked this. Great job Petra!

I read the story outloud to the Jr Miss reader (ha ha) and she said... "Eye surgery, cool! Now he'll see what his dog looks like!" Gotta love it!

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danuta.9

I enjoyed the humour in this poem. I still don't believe that poetry has to rhyme and think it's flow gets interrupted this way. Great imagination!
Worth my vote.

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artenzie

What a story! Your imagination has no bounds!

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petra michelle

Have you noticed the lyrics of some of the classic Christmas songs! They're three verses!

Thank you, Eva! Petra :))

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petra michelle

I didn't quite expect this! I hoped it would be a fun piece to enjoy for Christmas! Gracias, Carmen! :))

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petra michelle

Will convey that message to Laurie. We do communicate, the author and the heroine! ;)

Vielen dank! Petra :))

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petra michelle

Except for the book's cover, ;), it could very well fall into the children's category. For now, it's in the poems category!

No, I haven't yet, but will do as soon as possible! I sent you a message about Skype! Did you get it?

Thank you, Tetra! Petra :)) LOL at our names rhyming!

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