Such an imaginative story. I enjoyed it a lot, though I felt a bit sorry for Zing at the end, since his best friend was deserting him!

Amusing, fun to read.

We should never forget to have fun! Life is too short! :))

Perhaps Zing will take you the rings some time! ;)

for adding "Rollerblading..." to your favorites! Petra :))

Outstanding! Both mystical and real. It is a book that will touch not only children, but adults as well, because it teaches us to never lose that "child-like quality" and BELIEVE.

All anyone could hope for, a friend to fill a lonely void. I always wondered what Saturn would be like. Never considered the rings could be so much fun!

I am so glad you enjoyed it on as many levels as it has touched you! When I wrote this, I had no idea it could!
Thank you! Petra :))

Your story reminds us that we do not need to forget to dream and hold on to our innocense. We need to spend time remembering what is important to us and not be afraid to experience all emotions (sorrow, loss, sadness, love, passion, kindness...). Everything we experience makes us who we are and who we will become. I would liked to have been drawn in more and feeling like I was really there by using more imagery. Describe people and places and emotions using all the senses.
I loved the idea. It was very unique story and it also had a lesson to be learned about love, working through your emotions, and acceptance of who you are. It also shows that it is okay to have faults. No one is perfect and that is something that should be loved and accepted by all. Great job!!!

Thank you, Rowena!