It still needs some work, but I'm very glad that alot of you were able to relate to my contest entry. Thanks for hearting, commenting, and just giving me a chance!!!
Your friend, Chloe!!!!!!!!!

I love it! hope u win/won! u should!

Wow I was with you every step of that nightmare. I have had many similar. Your description of how you felt and order of events that led up to your climax had me in a grip. I couldn't not read it all!
G/L and keep writing!

A good contender.

A terrifying moment written down well and an impact without a set resolution.

I like it.

Good Story. I know the hurt of feeling betrayed. I was always the one who right or wrong was on the wrong side of the choosing.

My fathers only tenant was that my mother was always right, even if she was wrong and he knew it.

That wasn't the worst of it. He would even admit it, and then punish me for my attitude.

My heart ached when I read your book.

Wow. My heart seriously goes out to you, hon!

Chloe, my heart goes to you. I know what you went through, as I have felt like that for a long time about my parents. Mainly because I found out they wanted a girl.

I love this book. I hope you win the contest.

I love this book. I hope you win the contest.