Nice start to your first story. I enjoyed it. Keep on writing! 8)

amazing you need to write more keep me updated

amazing you need to write more keep me updated

amazing you need to write more keep me updated

You should really finish this book! It's really interesting and has a great story line. Just remember in writing to proof read before you publish and correct some spelling and grammar errors :) But this was a nice read.

-Jace

more right now lol

Amazing you really need to finish it i loved it :)