Querida ! (I must admit I'm more of a fan of the John Astin/Carolyn Jones version though)

...Wait! Was that French?

https://media1.giphy.com/media/xT0BKwt1L8QgVIDyp2/giphy.gif?cid=3640f6095bc92a0a48484d597757ced1

You know what querida means, right?

https://giphy.com/gifs/queue-the-addams-family-morticia-zIEnSEgNVWsVy

To my knowledge it means dear or darling in Spanish and was what Gomez Addams called Morticia

Sorry, just keeping in character. Ignore me like Tish does to Gomez. :)

I read up to chap 56, I think. She did get back with Langston. That seemed like it might be the end. Yes?

Ahh, nope, I'm wrong. Just checked. I'll read the rest soon. :)

And BTW, that wasn't the ending I was referring to. Different story. :)

What story were you referring to?

She's a fanatic for P&P stories and a little overly complimentary but I'm glad she liked it all the same. What did you think of the ending? Weak?

I'm not great with endings if you haven't picked up on that already. I never know how to convay the ending in my head.

The ending was fine, but it did feel a little untidy.
For this kind of story/genre there's probably a standard you'd be better aware of than I. Riding off into the sunset doesn't fit. Maybe have Mary doing some kind of task, or act, that has some kind of metaphorical or possibly significant implication. Hint at something, even if its just a happy ending.
Maybe, since Langston promised he'd answer every letter, she receives a new letter under her door, or on her dresser, every morning. So all you need to do is hint that this is a regular occurrence as she opens that day's. She smiles as she reads it, or grins wickedly, or similar. Then fade to black.
Just a thought.
I still liked it though.
It feels more like you (like what you're comfortable writing) than anything else I've read from you.

And don't forget I love rock and roll by jett jones
But I can't deal with Britney spears.... She uses to much autotune

Neil Diamond... nice!
My fave of his --"Cherry Cherry." Real jumpy.
Madonna was ma gurl back in HS and college, but she went a little nutso since.
All good picks. :)

Lol