You have my heart & vote.
Chris

I am assuming that the old man with all-timers is the young man who now wants to be a doctor. I think that is good, but it could use a little more detail when it switches back over to the young man. [But me picky personality is a bugger, so just ignore it.] Anyway, i think that it is good and you should keep it going.
-B

What a haunting picture. You captured every raw detail as well as my heart. You have my vote!

Really good story i enjoyed reading it, a unique style of writing. Keep it up

So, having said (truthfully) that Finding Self is A-1 writing, I want to back that statement up with a well-deserved vote.
Good, good job, Barry.

Good story, Barry. I am sure many older people will relate to this, and breathe a sigh of relief. Well done.

its filled with intense emotions and icould feel the main characters agony and confusion and the joy that's felt when it turns out to be a dream its just so reliveing. :)

Bravo, Barry! Well-done! With your usual insight, you pinpointed a moment in the human condition that can prove pivotal if taken seriously enough. And you did it in only a few page but with extraordinarily well-chosen words. As soon as I saw where the ending was leading, I got a big smile and said, "Nice one, Barry! Awesome!"

So. Here's my vote! 'D

I loved this! It kept me reading and interested to the end. I would suggest you reread and tweak just a few sentences but other than than this is a very fine story. Well done.

Filled with all the anxiety an altzheimer patient must feel. Good job.