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J. M. Rivers

Irresistible! For a short story.........with limited wording.........I am very impressed.

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Deleted User

Great story

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Deleted User

Delightful! I couldn't put it down. Well written. Thank you for sharing.

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asianbutterflies

Thank you for your comment. Glad you enjoyed the short story. I have begun a series if you're interested titled The Venus Guardians. The first two books are written and I am currently writing on my third. Thanks again. L.L.

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words75

What a great elevator ride!!

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lovetodouok

nice book very hot

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ilove2read6

Great Job!

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moschino

i really liked it ;] unfortunatley it was short ;[[

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asianbutterflies

Thanks for the comment. Yeah, it's short because it was entered into a contest with a word limit....Maybe one day I'll expand it.

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Deleted User

it was rlly good! <3

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mzforgetful12

omg

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sophie18

You should have kept on writing. It was really good.

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