next time add paragraphs

I am a little old for Pokemon, but i enjoyed the book.

perhaps i will be able to understand my grandchildren a little better now.

?? Sherbert Mose ?? I don't remember reading that Pokemon's name in the book. Did i just miss it?

Keep up the good work.

WOW!!! I luv it so far! It really is good. I've always loved pokemon. Write more soon!

I am lovin itss

I'm only up to page 10 and I'm loving it already! It really starts off like a Pokemon game, you have observed well! I love it, and I think once I've finished this book I'll be wanting more;)
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i like your story its really good

this book is awesome

Very good and well written!! Please continue and keep me updated!!!

~Cheyenne X)

ive only seen a few episodes of diamond and pearl....and that was about eight years ago. im pretty proud of how much ive managed to remember.

Nice