I didn't know she was a prostitute at the start, I just thought he was her girlfriend but he knew she was a gold digger XP Silly me
When the same person is talking you need to keep it all in the same paragraph, sometimes when the same person was talking you still skipped lines.
I cant really complain about the grammar of spelling cause I didn't see much mistakes.
I've never read a book like this, its very interesting. I liked... Show more
I didn't know she was a prostitute at the start, I just thought he was her girlfriend but he knew she was a gold digger XP Silly me
When the same person is talking you need to keep it all in the same paragraph, sometimes when the same person was talking you still skipped lines.
I cant really complain about the grammar of spelling cause I didn't see much mistakes.
I've never read a book like this, its very interesting. I liked how the girl was very closed up and how he kept trying to get her to open up. A lot of girls in this line of work would be very closed up and the fact he is trying to get her to open up is very nice.
I liked this story, I really did enjoy it mre than I thought :)
Is it over or is there more to come??
Thank you! I'll check the spacing of the dialogue to be sure it's all grouped correctly. And this is only the first half of the story, if I get some feedback on how to improve the first half, I'll add the rest soon. Hope you enjoy how it ends :)