What can I say... it was brilliant, frightening, unnerving... I could go on and on with the emotions this makes you feel. So, so well done.

I'm kind of lost for words! Lord, this is one of those stories filled with sickness and depravity, narrated in the voice of a master storyteller!

I've been aware of your comfort with powerful, in-depth description for a long time, but this takes the cake. The perfectly sensible rationale of the serial killer. The insanity of insanity! I've never read it explored so well. This was masterful, really.

The four minutes...I'd never heard of this, and true or otherwise, That truly made the theme unique and horrifying.

All's well that ends well:)

This is a really gripping tale, and definitely follows the saying "karma's a bitch" xD

I really think you did well in describing the characters, especially Norman. He's a guy you would loathe, but you sort of understand why he does what he does (I'm not going to delve into that, since it would be a spoiler).

Also, I really liked how you put a twist in the story in the end.

I enjoyed your story. Well written and flowing easily, you kept my attention throughout and had a nice twist at the end, though when Norm first seen the broken down truck I had figured it out to a degree. Anyways, great writing. Keep it up!

I just wanted to keep on reading... brilliant!!!

Distinguished. Group charactristic addictive, compared to this, drug.

It's not easy to convey such a strong message in so few words but you've hit the nail on the head with this one! You sucked in the reader right at the beginning and used just the right amount of description so not to offend or 'turn off' the reader; left something to the imagination. Brilliant!

A very fun horror tale. Thank you for sharing your very talented creation! -Atusha-

this book was great! i hope you write more i wanna know what happens next

A pretty well-crafted story. But to be honest this piece just stopped short of being perfect. And for a writer like you, perfection is a must.

I was disappointed with Norman, who seemed to be more of a 'crude and rudimentary' serial killer; certainly not a purist. And, as you well know, the readers always love purists. Most serial killers, when finally caught, are found to be devoid of any form of terror. Instead, they feel proud and bathe in their own notoriety. However, in case of Norman, he felt terrorized when he realized what was going to happen with him in the end. That's normal human behavior, not the behavior of someone who has killed nineteen woman just for sadistic pleasure.

All these shortcomings can be resolved easily and yes, this can be a doozie.

I loved the concept of four minutes as well. All in all, another brilliant piece from an exceptional writer.

~Prakash