Are you are in the process of writing something and need some extra encouragement/ support? If you are prepared to offer the same to other writers, but sometimes don't know what to say, or don't like writing long reviews, the review form below takes minutes to fill in but can be all that takes to inspire others, and yourself, to get writing again.
This group is for the POSITIVE encouragement of... Show More
Are you are in the process of writing something and need some extra encouragement/ support? If you are prepared to offer the same to other writers, but sometimes don't know what to say, or don't like writing long reviews, the review form below takes minutes to fill in but can be all that takes to inspire others, and yourself, to get writing again.
This group is for the POSITIVE encouragement of others to write. It takes a lot of time, patience and courage to write and publish something online, so let us all be supportive!
What to do.
Post a link to your story, and then check the list, or other's review forms, to find a story that you would like to comment on. Copy and fill in the review form below, and then paste it in the group for the writer to see. The writer will then review your story in return.
REVIEW FORM (Asterisk shows parts that MUST be completed)
* Well done for writing and publishing (write the name of the book/story you have read here) on Bookrix, which can be found at (copy the link to their story)
I really enjoyed reading chapter (Write the number of the chapter here if the writing was in chapters)
* The thing I enjoyed most about what I read was...
* I loved the part in the story when...
* In this chapter, my favourite character was .... because...
* I would love to see...happening next in the story/chapter
Any other optional comments:
(NOTE: Any suggestions for improvements (NO nit picking please!) should be written like this : Your story would be even better if you......)
I have also written a story called..., which can be found at... I would really love it if you could comment in the same way on my work. Many thanks (write your name/penname) Hide Text
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