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Hi
I'm having trouble with this block of dialogue. Is it clear on every line who is speaking? I don't want to use he said, she said etc for every line of speech, so I have used the character's action in some of the lines.
LittleScribbler
"I wonder where all the good/smart writers have gone?" Billie grumbled glancing at Edgar, hidden behind his paper at the other end of the breakfast table.”
"Eh, what?" he said, peering over the top of the page.
“ I said, where have all the good writers gone? Don't you listen?"
“ Eh, yes, of course."
“ What are you reading?"
Edgar chuckled as he muttered, "The comic strip”.
Billie snorted. Where had those days gone when they used to share everything, she wondered. What happened? When did the problem start? "We used to talk."
Edgar slapped his paper onto the table and spilt his coffee. “Blast!” His face reddened with his growing anger, as he brushed his sleeve across the table. "Well what do you want to talk about then?" He fixed Billie with that familiar cold, sharp look that always seemed to penetrate into Billie's soul.
"It’s just something at work you can’t do anything about. We've got three days before we go to print and there's only one story adequate for this month’s issue.
Edgar raised his bushy eyebrows; a look of puzzlement filled his eyes. "So, use it. What's the problem? You said it was adequate."
“ It's brilliant, but ..." Billie began as she turned to glance at the clock. "Oh, is that the time already?" She pushed back her chair, grabbed her bag and headed for the door.
One grey lock of hair fell hooked over the top of the paper.
"Don’t you have any lectures this morning?
"Not until this afternoon."
“You should have that unruly mop of curls trimmed; it should have been done six months ago,” and as an afterthought, she added, and make certain you clean up that mess before you go,” she called over her shoulder and closed the door behind her.

The is the description

Elisha was hated for being black and having anorexia. She was the only 100% African in her school and she was darker than a normal dark person.

She wore black lenses and had really white eyes which made her unique but one bully led to another and she ended up being a victim.

Her entire school hated her until the end of high school. She lived in an orphanage with her little brother until university and didn't have enough money to pay for her university fees and decided to take up the scholarship offer she got from her old school.

She doesn't have anorexia and resumed school in university. 50% of the student that bullied her are back in the same school.

Will she be able to handle it?