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i love this book ^^ its great
(hey on page 9 when she is getting dresses it says she managed to pull on a clean unicorn just saying )
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XxwolfgurluntamedxX
XD My friend must have written that while I got up for a break... funny to find that out now.
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(not to seem rude) i was laughing so hard when i read over it and noticed the unicorn bit ^^
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Very good job with the prologue. You set the stage for the conflict and some of the characteristics and morality if the main character. I look forward to the coming story.
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XxwolfgurluntamedxX
Thanks, I'm going to try to work on it this weekend.